The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.

The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
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The diagrams show the process of
cement
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manufacture and
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how
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is used for concrete production. As is observed from the graph,
cement
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construction involves some complex processes and concrete production is done using water,
cement
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and sand in a concrete mixer. The first diagram depicts that, to produce
cement
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the limestone and clay are crushed and the produced powder from
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is passed through a mixer. The power is
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passed via a rotating heater where heat is supplied constantly and
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process creates the raw adhesive materials which are passed on a grinder machine to
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produce the plaster. The mud is
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packed and marketed for sale. The second diagram presents how concrete is produced for housing and building work. In the first stage, 15% plaster, 10% water, 25% sand and 50% small stones are mixed in a concrete mixer machine and the machine rotates fast to have the ingredients mixed together to create the concrete.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cement with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "diagrams" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • construction
  • cement-making
  • raw materials
  • crushing
  • mixing
  • heating
  • grinding
  • cement powder
  • packaging
  • distribution
  • concrete
  • versatility
  • strength
  • aggregate
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