Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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often argue that if they get into a bad
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, it is easy to admit the
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believe that it is
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have a principle to accept a bad
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and do not think
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much about the
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because it can waste
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their
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. If they have a
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, sometimes they do not have any idea how to solve it. Especially when they have a lot of
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things
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that they should do, it can be more effective to do
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.
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, there are some bad
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. So, if you do not
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waste your
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, you will not care about the rumour and just let the
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see with their own
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about the issues.
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, several
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have a different
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about facing the
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see a bad
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as a
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to improve and try
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solution
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believe
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, they do not only solve the bad
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,
sometimes
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but sometimes
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they can get a better result than they expected.
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, if you have a bad score in
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test, you should see the solution how to increase the score and try again in the other moments. After you can do that, you
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not only have a probability to achieve the goals
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but
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will get a higher value than you expected. In my
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,
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completely agree with
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view.
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this
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mindset can make us
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become better
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people
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and never give up. In conclusion,
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both views have their own
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such
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as
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bad
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a bad
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situation
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can make your
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become easier and
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waste of
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while
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the other
believe
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that it is better to try and improve from the
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can be a way to get a better result.
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