The graph below shows the percentage of households with different kinds of technology in the U.S. from 1995 to 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting themain features, and make comparisons whererelevant.Write at least 150 words.
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The given line graph illustrates
on
the changes in the percentage of households with different kinds of technology in the US between 1995 and 1999.
Change preposition
apply
Overall
, it can be seen that all appliances are increasing throughout the given period, particularly the washing machine that most people are using it
.
In 1995, the washing machine reached 60% of Correct pronoun usage
apply
users
then
gradually rose until reached its peak in the final year
with an exact 80%. Likewise
, the computer hold
the second position in the first Wrong verb form
held
year
before had a slight rise to 70% in 1999. In contrast
, despite the small number of users
in the first year
(approximately 19%), the phone succeed
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succeeds
to rose
dramatically and surpassed Change preposition
in rising
dvd
player and Correct your spelling
DVD
computer
. Ended at over 70% in 1999.
In regards to Fix the agreement mistake
computers
dvd
Correct your spelling
DVD
player
, it started at above 20% in the first Fix the agreement mistake
players
year
prior to experienced
a gradual fall in 1996. After which, Increased slightly to 40% in Wrong verb form
experiencing
final
period. Add an article
the final
Moreover
, internet
were the less Correct article usage
the internet
users
compared to other technology
, yet still showed an uptrend until reached Fix the agreement mistake
technologies
a
half of Remove the article
apply
users
in 1999.Submitted by fadhlannaufaall on
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