The graph below shows the percentage of households with different kinds of technology in the U.S. from 1995 to 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting themain features, and make comparisons whererelevant.Write at least 150 words.

The given line graph illustrates

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the changes in the percentage of households with different kinds of technology in the US between 1995 and 1999.

Overall

, it can be seen that all appliances are increasing throughout the given period, particularly the washing machine that most people are using

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. In 1995, the washing machine reached 60% of

users

then

gradually rose until reached its peak in the final

year

with an exact 80%.

Likewise

, the computer

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the second position in the first

year

before had a slight rise to 70% in 1999.

In contrast

, despite the small number of

users

in the first

year

(approximately 19%), the phone

succeed

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to rose

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dramatically and surpassed

dvd

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DVD

player and

computer

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computers

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. Ended at over 70% in 1999. In regards to

dvd

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DVD

player

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players

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, it started at above 20% in the first

year

prior to

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a gradual fall in 1996. After which, Increased slightly to 40% in

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period.

Moreover

,

internet

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the internet

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were the less

users

compared to other

technology

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technologies

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, yet still showed an uptrend until reached

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half of

users

in 1999.