Education and health care should be funded by the government and free for everyone. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Education

and

health care

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healthcare

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service

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services

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are considered to be

the

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a

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necessity for

everyone

as it is their right to receive the same amount of quality and

service

.

This

essay agrees that

government

should provide free

access

of

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to

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education

and

health

care to its people as it could reduce unemployment

as well as

improve

everyone

's well-being. Every

students

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student

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should have the opportunity to

be expose

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be exposed

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in

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to

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receiving proper academic courses but

this

access

tend

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to be

hinder

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hindered

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due to

the

students

' inability to pay their tuition fee. If

government

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the government

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can fund

low income

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low-income

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students

to be able to continue their academic journey, it could prevent unemployment as

everyone

have

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the opportunity to be educated.

For instance

, the Indonesian

education

ministry created the Kampus Merdeka Program, a program that

facillitate

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facilitate

facilitates

undergraduates with

experience

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experiences

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beyond their classroom

such

as internship and student exchange, by providing coverage

in

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for

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living

cost

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costs

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and insurance.

In

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As

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result

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a result

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, financial issue is not part of the

students

'

issue

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in pursuing new

knowldge

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knowledge

or preparing their career path.

Health

is a

curicial

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crucial

critical

matter for

everyone

to be able to

access

it with the same amount of

service

and quality.

However

, there are certain people who still approach

to

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cheaper medical alternatives

such

as herbs and

unexperience

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inexperienced

gurus that say they can heal them but rather it can cause more harm.

This

could

be prevent

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be prevented

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if

government

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the government

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can

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could

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fund free

health

service

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services

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and

this

has

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was

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proven when Indonesia

has

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had

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it

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its

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first COVID-19 outbreak.

Indonesian

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Indonesians

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pursue

in

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apply

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drinking tea

as well as

sticking to paracatemol as they believe that it could prevent them

form

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from

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getting infected,

in

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but in

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reality

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reality,

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it

dosen't

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doesn't

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. As the

health

ministry

provide

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provides

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free

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a free

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COVID-19 vaccine,

Indonesian infected

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Indonesian-infected

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patients

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patients'

patient's

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growth rate dramatically

reduce

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reduces

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. In conclusion, it is the

government

's duty to provide better quality and

service

for its people by giving free

access

in

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education

and

health

. It is

everyone

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everyone's

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rights

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right

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and

privelege

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privilege

to be able to receive those

service

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services

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in order for the country to prosper.