The graph gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.

The graph gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.
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The line graph depicts the proportion of the recent occupants living in
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Philippines
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, Malaysia,
Thailand
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and Indonesia in the following period of time and the estimation for several years later. In brief, either Malaysia or Indonesia became the most attractive countries that outpaced the other ones. It is approved by the dramatic rise over the period. Meanwhile,
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Philippines
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the Philippines
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and
Thailand
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achieved a slight fluctuation
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even though
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in
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the end of year
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, by reaching a significant upsurge. In the revealed data, Malaysia started with the second highest place to live at just under 30 per
cent
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in 1970.
In contrast
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, Indonesia was the lowest populated nation with roughly 13 per
cent
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in 1970. Both are estimated to be heavily populated countries in the
last
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period of
year
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presented at approximately 80 per
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and 60 per
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respectively.
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Philippines
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The Philippines
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and
Thailand
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fluctuated during
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time.
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Philippines
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The Philippines
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was in the first position
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and
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achieved a high peak in 1990.
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, it decreased in 2010
at
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just above 40 per
cent
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and got its resurgence with 50 per
cent
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in 2040.
Thailand
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also
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showed dramatically increase from just above 15 per
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and it is predicted to be over 40 per
cent
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in 2040 with the subtle movement of growth.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words philippines, thailand, cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "dramatic" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • graph
  • percentage
  • population
  • Asian countries
  • living in cities
  • 1970
  • 2020
  • predictions
  • 2030
  • 2040
  • introduction
  • overview
  • trend
  • body paragraph
  • compare
  • predicted percentages
  • summarize
  • closing statement
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