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The chart shows the results of a survey into the causes of poor school attendance in the UK in 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows the results of a survey into the causes of poor school attendance in the UK in 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The results of a recent survey into the causes of poor School attendance in the UK. The pie chart depicts the
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 information about the major sources of the students’ bad presence in England.
Overall
, both parents working is the most vital factor that influences learners’ abominable coming to the class of the four other factors, lack of school discipline, peer group pres Sure, bullying and upbringing respectively. Upbringing
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 the
last
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 low classroom participation. Both parents working is the
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 cause with just under half, forty
percentagewise
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percentwise
 supporting the laziness of attending the learning process in the class.
On the other hand
, the application of school discipline
is still lack
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 and it supplies above
quarter
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 per
cent
. The other
elements
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are
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 peer group pressure, bullying reached
precise
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 quarter per
cent
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that
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lead
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 to the absence of class instruction. Both elements gain fifteen per
cent
. The lowest one is coming from the parents
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bringing up their children.
Although
 its effect does not seem significant
however
 it is
also
 appointed in the displayed data with just under
quarter
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 per
cent
.
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