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These days, world leaders of all kinds are younger than those in the past. What are the reasons? Is this a negative or positive trend?

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The outgrowing and constantly developing
world
 needs numerous personalities acting as a leader for the group of individuals in various social and political aspects. I believe enhancing leadership quality in an individual is a tough task and is a
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 fact. despite
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world
 leaders leading different societies are young adults compared to the historical graph of experienced leaders. A debate has been evoked about knowledge leading the
world
 versus experience leading the
world
 in recent times.
this
 essay will explore the reasons and trends about the same in the upcoming paragraphs in detail. I believe that the sheer reason for
this
 newly embracing trend is the exposure of youth to a detailed source of information, a multi-level learning approach, and the freedom to explore the
world
 with a lesser amount of restrictions.
in addition
 to
this
, the availability of the internet at their fingertips provides them with a varied source of answers to the questions popping into their mind.
this
 builds a level of self-confidence and generates the potential to gain the qualities required for leadership.
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 approachable and positive trend
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 believe that outcomes are negative when noticed for a longer period of time.
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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • world leaders
  • educational opportunities
  • expertise
  • social media
  • platform
  • demographic shifts
  • career paths
  • fresh perspectives
  • innovative approaches
  • policy-making
  • infusion
  • relatable
  • engaged
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