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The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainme Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainme Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table chart depicts the information in
ratio
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the ratio
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 of monthly household income
to
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in
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 five countries(France, Germany,
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the Uk
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Uk
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UK
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,Turkey and Spain) from
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through
throughout
throught
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through
 consumption
on
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of
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 food and drink, housing,
clothe
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clothes
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 ing and entertainment.
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, it is clear from the chart that, the five countries
spend
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 on food and drink and housing was the maximum
of
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for
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 clothing and entertainment.
While
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in
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apply
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the
Uk
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UK
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 was spending the same percentage
from
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through

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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