The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The data illustrated the
number
of stores that opened and closed in a certain country in the year
2011 to 2018. Overall
, both showed a downward trend, with the number
of shops
that opened being much more stable in comparison to the shops
that stopped their business. The highest and lowest numbers of new
opened Change the adjective
newly
shops
came in the year
2011 and 2012 respectively. Meanwhile, the highest total shop closings happened in the year
2013, and the least closings happened in 2015.
The number
of shops
that opened in 2012 was half of the number
of new shops
in 2011, with just around 8,500 to 4,000 respectively. It then
steadily rose until 2014, gaining around a thousand new shops
each year
before coming back down to 4,000 in 2015. From there, it remained rather stagnant until 2017 before dropping to 3,000 shops
in 2018.
Starting from just around 6,500 shops
, the frequency of stores that closed generally got higher between 2014 and 2013. It afterwards dropped until 2015, with a dramatic drop from just about 7,500 shops
to around 500 shops
in 2015. After that, it rose back up to 5,000 shops
a year
and remained rather steady from 2016 to 2018.Submitted by acupofbrownsugar
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