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The table below shows the consumption of three basic foods (wheat, maize, rice) by people in four different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the consumption of three basic foods (wheat, maize, rice) by people in four different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided diagram illustrates the comparison of energy intake from main carbohydrate consumption in 4 nations from different continents.
Overall
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, the table describes the individual daily
calorie
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 intake of 3 basic foods: wheat,
maize
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, and
rice
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; in 4 observed countries: Cambodia,
Poland
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, Egypt, and Mexico.
While
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, wheat is a dominant option in
Poland
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 and Egypt, Cambodians and Mexicans consume
rice
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 and
maize
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 more, respectively. In Cambodia, people eat
rice
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 the most with almost 1.5k
calorie
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 intake, which is recorded thrice than Egyptians (501).
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, both Mexico and
Poland
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's citizens only consume less than 100
calorie
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 of
rice
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 daily, at 57 and 19
calorie
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, respectively. Wheat,
on the contrary
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, is the top option in Egypt with a little more than a thousand
calorie
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 (1,095). Following closely,
Poland
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 is recorded at the second place with 865
calorie
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, leaving Mexico and Cambodia far behind with only 275
calorie
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 and 18
calorie
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.
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, Mexican consumes
maize
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 the most from all observed countries with 1,083
calorie
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 in daily basis.
This
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 number is almost twice compared to Egyptians at 578
calorie
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 and 10 times bigger than Camboadians at 103
calorie
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. Interestingly, Polish people does not consume
maize
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 as their basic food.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words calorie, maize, rice, poland with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • basic foods
  • staples
  • dietary preferences
  • agricultural output
  • nutritional intake
  • per capita
  • predominant
  • subsistence crops
  • culinary habits
  • food security
  • statistical overview
  • consumption patterns
  • comparative analysis
  • domestic production
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