The diagram shows how fruit is canned. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates in what way fruit is canned. In general,

it is clear that

there are fourteen stages in the production,

pear

is canned. Looking at the details, at the beginning

pear

is picked from trees by hand,

then

transported to the factory by

large

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truck. After that, pears washed by a special machine and checked

quality

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for quality

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then

some psars are poor quality rejected.

Next,

pears

kept

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are kept

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into

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at

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the

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a

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low temperature.

Following

this

,

pear

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the pear

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is peeled and the

corse

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core

are

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removed. It is

then

sliced into the sizes and put into

cans

.

On the other hand

,

cans

they

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are sealed and cooked over the heat appliances and

cans

are sterilized.

Additionally

, when the

cans

are cool a label is attached and they are placed into

the

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apply

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storage, all in

all

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the

cans

pear is

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are

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ready to be despatched to supermarkets and sold.