The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.
The bar chart illustrates the price of exports in different categories in one country between 2015 and 2016. The table represents
comparison
of percentage changes in each category in both years.
Add an article
a comparison
Overall
, it is
clearly can be seen that petroleum Unnecessary verb
apply
products
were the highest valued
export in both years. In terms of percentage, all four categories increased except gems and jewellery.
In 2015, petroleum Add a hyphen
highest-valued
products
started from just above 60 billion dollars
and then
slightly increased to approximately 63 million
dollars
. The
similar trend showed engineered goods which accounted for 57 billion Correct article usage
A
dollars
at the beginning of exportation and ending
up with just about 62 Wrong verb form
ended
million
dollars
. Gems
and Correct article usage
The gems
jewerelly
category had an opposite trend Correct your spelling
jewellery
with
going down from 44 Change preposition
apply
million
dollars
, in 2015, to just above 40 million
dollars
in the final year. The least products
were first exported in agricultural products
which ranged between approximately 31 and 33 billion dollars
and second in textiles with a rapid growth from almost 25 million
dollars
to just above 31 million
dollars
.
The least export earned
textile category had a significant Add a hyphen
export-earned
Correct quantifier usage
number of rice
rice
in the percentage of changes in values, which accounted for 15.24%. Correct your spelling
rise
Second
biggest section that experienced Add an article
The second
A second
Correct article usage
a sharply
sharply
growth trend is engineered Change the word
sharp
products
with the
proportion of 8.5%. Petroleum Correct article usage
a
products
' price was bigger than previous
year Add an article
the previous
for
3%. Agricultural Change preposition
at
products
' value almost remained unchanged with growth, only 0.81%.Submitted by dnm.best on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words products, dollars, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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