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People are using a lot of online language translation apps. Are there more advantages than disadvantages to such service?

#people #language #translation #apps #service
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Globalization turns
this
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 world into no border.
People
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 nowadays can talk or chat with
another friend
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other friends
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 or even strangers from all around the globe.
Along with
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this
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 opportunity,
people
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 found that
language
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 boundaries are still there. To overcome
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 difficulty, they have been using
language
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translation
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apps
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 or devices in order to facilitate their communication. There are many known
language
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translation
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apps
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such
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 as Google Translate, Bing Translate, or any dictionary online. In Indonesia, there is a
language
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translation
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 device called
alfalink
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alkaline
, which is more like a dictionary device. The online
app
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 is very easy to use.
People
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 only need to open their site and put the word they want to translate. It is usually free. But if
people
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 want to upgrade their service to more advanced writing and answering, they need to spend a little money to subscribe to their services. The online
app
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 is very useful, recently, the
app
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 can translate our voice into another
language
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 and make the
app
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 sound like the human voice. With the variety of
translation
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apps
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,
people
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 can choose one which they think can give the most accurate
translation
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. There are some disadvantages to using online
apps
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. We knew that we would always need an internet connection to get online. With
this
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 condition,
people
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 who travel somewhere far out of
range
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the range
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 of the internet connection will find it hard to use
translation
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apps
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. There is another problem that arises too,
people
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 find that online
translation
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apps
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 sometimes give them inaccurate words or sentences. In order to prevent errors like
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,
app
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 developers usually put some features on their
app
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 which allow
people
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 can edit and suggest the right
translation
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.
Although
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 there are problems emerge from using online
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apps
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, the advantages still outweigh the disadvantages. In the near future, it can be predicted that
people
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 will not use any
language
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translation
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 devices anymore. Using the online
app
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 will be more convenient since
people
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 only need to download the
app
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 on their phone, and do not need to bring any additional devices.
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Task Response
Ensure that your essay directly addresses the question of whether there are more advantages than disadvantages. Clearly state your opinion and make sure that the subsequent paragraphs consistently support that stance.
Coherence and Cohesion
Employ a wider range of cohesive devices and transition words to better connect ideas and paragraphs. This could include contrasting connectors to highlight differences between advantages and disadvantages.
Coherence and Cohesion
When presenting examples or disadvantages, ensure they are fully elaborated upon to avoid vague statements. Each main point or example should be clarified and explained to enhance the overall coherence of the essay.
Task Response
Introduce a clear conclusion which succinctly summarizes the main points and restates your opinion. This helps to signal the end of the argument and provides closure to the essay.

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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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