The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The bar chart illustrates the different quantity of
people
who living
in three places (Change the form of the verb
live
towns
, rural areas, and cities) between 1995 and 2010. The people
are divided into two categories, born in and outside Australia
. All the data was presented in percentages.
In general, cities were the most places where people
lived in 1995 and 2010, while
towns
and rural areas only have a small portion.
In 1995, both people
who lived in and outside Australia
preferred to live in cities with a total of 50% and 60% respectively, followed by towns
with a total percentage of 30% and 40 each. Moreover
, Add an article
the town
town
became the least choice place for living with Fix the agreement mistake
towns
the
percentage of 20% for those who were born in Correct article usage
a
Australia
and around 10% for outside Australia
.
In 2010, there was a significant increase in population in the city by almost 20%. Meanwhile, the towns
showed a drastic decrease, around 20% for people
who were born in Australia
and 30% outside Australia
. The rest, rural areas experienced a slight drop of under 10% for both categories.Submitted by kucinglab on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, towns, australia with synonyms.
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