The graph bellow shows four categories of citrus fruits and top countries to which these were exported in thousand tones in 2012.

The graph bellow shows four categories of citrus fruits and top countries to which these were exported in thousand tones in 2012.
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The bar chart illustrates the most favourite
export
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destinations for citrus fruits (Oranges, Lemons, Grapefruits, and others) in 2012. In general, The United
States
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became the only country which appeared in all of the given
data
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, even though it was not the country which imported the most in any given category. The top destination for orange
export
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was South Africa at 1 million
tonnes
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. The number was more than The United
States
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and Egypt import quantity combined together. A similar
data
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trend
also
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occurred in lemon
export
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, where
Mexico
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outnumbered The United
States
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and Argentina at 500,000
tonnes
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.
While
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for others category,
Mexico
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significantly dominated the
data
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at the same number that it had for Lemons
export
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(500,000
tonnes
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)
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, a different
data
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trend happened to Grapefruits
export
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. Turkey led the chart by 100,000
tonnes
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difference from the runner-up (
Mexico
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) at 300,000
tonnes
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.
Moreover
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,
Mexico
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overpassed The United
States
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at the same number of differences.
Although
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in
this
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category,
Mexico
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did not put itself on the first rank,
this
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country was the one that imported the most fruits, followed by South Africa at 1 million
tonnes
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words export, states, data, tonnes, mexico with synonyms.
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