The bar charts below show the number of hours each teacher spent teaching in different schools in four different countries in 2001.

The bar charts below show the number of hours each teacher spent teaching in different schools in four different countries in 2001.
The chart above illustrates the number of
hours
that teachers spent in different
schools
across 4 countries in 2001. At a glance, The United States of America led the data in all of the education levels given in the chart. In teaching
the
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primary school, teachers in
Iceland
spent the least amount of
time
at less than 600
hours
,
while
teachers in the US spent the most at 750
hours
.
This
phenomenon
also
happened to the teaching
hours
in Lower Secondary
Schools
, where
Iceland
had the least
hours
to spend at a slight difference from its teaching
time
for Elementary
Schools
with just less than 50
hours
difference.
Meanwhile
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the US had the most
time
spent on Lower Secondary
schools
compared to other countries. For the
time
spent on teaching the upper secondary
schools
, The US dominated at almost 1200
hours
,
whereas
Japan spent the lowest
hours
at 700. The other 2 countries (Spain and
Iceland
) almost had the same amount of
time
spent around 900
hours
,
altough
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although
at
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the end,
Iceland
spent more than Spain.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, schools, iceland, time with synonyms.
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