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The bar charts below show the number of hours each teacher spent teaching in different schools in four different countries in 2001.

The bar charts below show the number of hours each teacher spent teaching in different schools in four different countries in 2001.
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The chart above illustrates the number of
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 that teachers spent in different
schools
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 across 4 countries in 2001. At a glance, The United States of America led the data in all of the education levels given in the chart. In teaching
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primary school, teachers in
Iceland
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 spent the least amount of
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 at less than 600
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 teachers in the US spent the most at 750
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.
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 happened to the teaching
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 in Lower Secondary
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, where
Iceland
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 had the least
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 to spend at a slight difference from its teaching
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 for Elementary
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 with just less than 50
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 difference.
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 the US had the most
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 spent on Lower Secondary
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 compared to other countries. For the
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 spent on teaching the upper secondary
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, The US dominated at almost 1200
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,
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 Japan spent the lowest
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 at 700. The other 2 countries (Spain and
Iceland
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) almost had the same amount of
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 spent around 900
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 the end,
Iceland
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 spent more than Spain.
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