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The process below shows the Human Resources (HR) recruitment process for a company. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

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The flowchart illustrates how the
company
 recruits its employees.
Overall
, there are three main stages in the process including creating a job listing, and after that, the
candidates
 can submit their
application
. In the
last
 stage, there will be some information
as
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 the outcome
regarding
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 their
application
.
Initially
, the list of requirements is drawn up, and if it is ready, the
company
 will publish the information on some online platform.
Then
, the
candidates
 can download the
application
 form and once they fill out and complete it, they must submit it.
Following
this
, the
application
 will be assessed, and
results
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, either
it is
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 rejected or accepted. If the
application
 is accepted, the applicants will be invited to do some interviews. For the
last
 stage, if the
candidates
 are chosen to be successful applicants and runners-up, the
company
 offers the job to them.
On the other hand
, the
candidates
 whose
application
 is rejected either after the
application
 is assessed or after the interview, will get an email thanking them for showing interest in joining the
company
.
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Task Achievement
To improve your score in Task Response, make sure to cover all aspects of the process in your summary. Include all stages and key actions, and consider adding more specific details or examples if they are mentioned in the original diagram or text.
Coherence & Cohesion
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    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 2 - Example
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