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The table below shows the consumption of three basic foods, rice, wheat and maize, by People in four different countries.

The table below shows the consumption of three basic foods, rice, wheat and maize, by People in four different countries.
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The table illustrates staple food intake, namely
rice
,
wheat
, and
maize
, from four varied countries.
Overall
, it can be seen that Egypt ranks first among other states in terms of its calorie consumption,
while
 Poland
claimed
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claims
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 to be the lowest in caloric utilization. Looking through the details,
wheat
 has been the main staple food of Egypt, specifically 1095
calories
/
day
.
This
 fact makes both the daily
rice
 and
maize
 intake of its country stand roughly half of the
wheat
 (501
calories
/
day
 and 578
calories
/
day
).
On the other hand
, Polan
rank
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ranks
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last
of
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in
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 food consumption among others.
However
, there is a huge gap between the level of
calories
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calorie
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 usage.
Wheat
 consumed by Poland inhabitants up to 865
calories
/
day
,
while
rice
 nearly touched 20
calories
 per
day
 and merely zero for
maize
 usage. Mexico and
Cambodi
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Cambodia
 both reflect
an
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the
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 opposite
for
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of
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 each other.
Consumption
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The consumption
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 level of
rice
 in
Cambodi
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Cambodia
have
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has
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 reached the number 1445 (
calories
/
day
),
makes
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making
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 it the highest carbs intake,
meanwhile
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meanwhile,
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maize
 has been Mexico’s way to
fulfill
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fulfil
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 the
starve
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starving
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 with the number 1083 (
calories
/
day
).
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words rice, wheat, maize, calories, day with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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