The chart and table below given information about tourists at a particular holiday resort in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparasions where irrelevant
The pie chart and table pictured the percentage of
travelers
at the specific vacation resort and some information about the activity attractions.
It can be seen that Change the spelling
travellers
Europe
and United States of America citizens dominate the other two regions as tourists. Correct your spelling
European
Moreover
, Asians and Americans are mostly choosing hotels for similar activity
, which is sightseeing, Fix the agreement mistake
activities
while
Europeans and other tourists from varied continents went wild by choosing camping or caravan as their inn due to
their expressive activities.
Reflected from the pie chart, European visitors took the
first place in terms of Correct article usage
apply
traveling
to Australia with Change the spelling
travelling
the
number of nearly 40%, followed by Americans just 2 Correct article usage
a
percent
below the European average, leaving marginally Asians and other regions of tripper with Change the spelling
per cent
the
percentage of merely 18% and 10%.
Moving on to the table served, American and Asian foreigners chose hotels with a range of 4 to 5 stars as their main holiday lodgement Correct article usage
a
due to
sightseeing as their tourist attractions
of choice that took 1 to 2 weeks. Fix the agreement mistake
attraction
In contrast
, the Europeans and other regions picked camping or caravan to stay throughout the visitation period (merely between 16 to 10 days) considering their tourists
destinations that are mostly outdoor-related activities, Fix the agreement mistake
tourist
such
as swimming or
sunbathing and surfing.Correct word choice
apply
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