The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph demonstrates the
number
of
passengers
who appear at London Underground Station in a
day
.
Overall
, there is a dramatic fluctuation in the
number
of
passengers
during the
day
.
In addition
, it is clearly shown at rush hour when the line of customers is the largest.
Initially
, there are 100 underground
passengers
found at the station and
this
statistic grows sharply until 8am when the
number
of
passengers
reaches the highest figure, at 400. After the busiest time, the rate declines substantially until 10am when it gets to appreciate 190. Between 10am and 14pm, the
number
increases moderately with a plateau of over 300 rail users. In the afternoon, the figure has a considerable fall with less than 100
passengers
at 16pm. Immediately, there is a steep boom of people using the station at 18pm, at around 380. After the golden time of the
day
, numbers decline rapidly and
then
have a small oscillation from 20pm to 22pm with the figure
at the end
of the
day
being nearly 150.
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