■The chart below give information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010. ■Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The chart below shows British
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people
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people's
giving
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of giving
money
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charity
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age
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range
in 1990 and 2010.
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Overall
, British Linking Words
people
along their Use synonyms
age
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range
showed an upward trend in both Use synonyms
years
1990 and 2010, Use synonyms
However
, there were some fluctuations, Linking Words
although
in 1990 and 2010, Linking Words
people
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age
ranged from 18 to 25 Use synonyms
years
old that gave Use synonyms
money
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charity
had Use synonyms
a lower rates
, it was higher for Correct the article-noun agreement
lower rates
a lower rate
people
above 65 Use synonyms
years
old.
In 1990, British Use synonyms
people
that gave Use synonyms
money
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charity
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age
ranged from 18 to 25 Fix the agreement mistake
ages
years
old were about 17% Use synonyms
being
higher than in 2010 by approximately 10%, Unnecessary verb
apply
then
it rose to about 32% from Linking Words
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age
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the age
range
26 to 35,and Use synonyms
then
it continued to increase as the Linking Words
age
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range
increased as wellUse synonyms
,
until it reached its peak value for about 42 % for Remove the comma
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age
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range
36-50 ,Use synonyms
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however
it declined to be around 32% at Add a comma
however,
age
above 65 Use synonyms
years
old.
In 2010, Use synonyms
people
ranged from 18 to 25 Use synonyms
years
old were about 7% who gave Use synonyms
money
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the
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charity
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then
it continued to increase as the Linking Words
age
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range
increased as well, until it reached its peak value Use synonyms
for
about 37 % for Change preposition
of
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age
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the age
range
51-65 ,Use synonyms
however
, it declined to be around 35% at Linking Words
age
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, money, charity, age, range, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "gave" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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