The chart below gives information about birth and death rates in Switzerland from 1970 to 2020 according to United Nations statistics. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The information about the life death
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and fatality Correct your spelling
expectancy
rate
of Switzerland during the year
1970 to 2020 has been Fix the agreement mistake
years
portry
by Correct your spelling
portrayed
United
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the United
Nation
statistics bar graph. The data has been Fix the agreement mistake
Nations
calibarated
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calibrated
millions
. Overall
it can be seen that birth rate
are showing Fix the agreement mistake
rates
longitudinal
increase in subsequent years.
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a longitudinal
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begin
year
1975, Change the article
the year
born
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the birth
rate
of people were
marked at around 1.2 Correct subject-verb agreement
was
millions
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million
while
the mortality rate
was depicted around
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at around
year
1985,Change the article
the year
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the
rate
was seen in reverse prapotional
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proportional
however
, the number of new born
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newborn
were remain
constant. There was a dramatic Change the verb form
were remained
were remaining
increased
manifested in the Change the form of the verb
increase
rate
of death in Switzerland, which accounted highest 1.4 million in the year
1995 compare
to any other Change the form of the verb
compared
year
. In the same year
population growth also
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started Unnecessary verb
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upward
trend.
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an upward
increased
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rate
of birth in Switzerland, it comprised of 1.5 to 3 millions
between 2005 Change to singular
million
to
2025. Correct word choice
and
On the other hand
, a measurable down fall
is seen in the Correct your spelling
downfall
aging
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ageing
poplulation
in subsequent years, which dropped by 1.5 million to 0.5 Correct your spelling
population
millions
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million
the
2005 to 2025.Change the article
apply
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