The chart below gives information about birth and death rates in Switzerland from 1970 to 2020 according to United Nations statistics. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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birth
and death
rates in Switzerland from year
1970 to 2020 from United Nations statistics.
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year
throughout
1975 to 2025. Change preposition
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birth
rate
, and the light blue chart shows the death
rate
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1975, the starting Change preposition
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year
, the birth
rate
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was
million
and the death
rate
displays
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was
million
. On
the following years, the improvement Change preposition
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remain
stagnant Change the verb form
remains
to
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1.7
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a 1.7
milion
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million
of
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birth
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the birth
rate
and 1.5 million
of
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in
death
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the death
rate
by the year
1995. On the other hand
, 10 years later, on
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the year
2005
the bar chart shows a significant rise Add a comma
2005,
on
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birth
rate
to 2.7 million
and the death
rate
went down to 1.1 million
. On
the Change preposition
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year
2025, the changes were similar to of
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those of
year
2005, where birth
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the birth
rate
increased more to 3.2 million
, and the death
rate
reduced to 0.8 million
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