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Nowadays, the quality of education is very low. Some people think that we should encourage our students to evaluate and criticize their teachers; others believe that this would result in a loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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It is believed that the quality of
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education has
went
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 low and
therfore
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therefore
, some people try to encourage their own kids to insult their own professors.
In contrast
,
other
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others
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 think that it is
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 idea and will end up
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losing respect and discipline in the class.
This
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also
 present some valid reasons.
To begin
 with, in
current
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 era campuses have more subjects than needed.
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 in
past
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 few years it
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also
 knew that in government institutions, teachers are coming just to have their
pay-cheque
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. They don't focus more on the education sector, and
thus
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 majority of children don't get their problems solved.
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, In many
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 there are many schools in which the tutors just pass their time by not spending much attention on children, and
as a result
 those kids never get the chance to achieve their
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 success.
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parents think that by disrespecting their tutors, kids would
also
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 know the actual meaning of discipline. There is an irony that,
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teachers should always be praised by their students
instead
 of lowering their value. Some parents oppose
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this
 in order to maintain
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harmony.
For instance
, If a child
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 to make fun of his own teacher,
than
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 he
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 never know the actual meaning of discipline
through out
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 his entire life. In conclusion,
i
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 opine by stating that
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children should never disrespect their teachers
instead
of
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this
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they can tell their parents and explain the whole scenario.
Additionally
, the government should
also
 take strict action and should employ a few
staffs which
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 can regularly check the behaviour and the teaching method of the tutors.
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coherence cohesion
Focus on organizing your ideas more clearly with a logical structure that flows from introduction to conclusion. Try using topic sentences at the beginning of each paragraph to introduce the central idea, ensuring that subsequent sentences elaborate on that theme.
coherence cohesion
Include an introduction with a clear thesis statement that addresses the task directly, and a conclusion that summarizes the main points and restates your opinion for a strong finish.
task achievement
Strengthen your argument by providing more specific examples and evidence to support your main points. This will help in making your essay more persuasive and relevant to the topic.

Your opinion

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If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

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