The chart gives employment and education statistics for eight European countries in 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The chart gives employment and education statistics for eight European countries in 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The charts illustrate the rate of occupation and graduate students in eight European
countries
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in 2015.
Overall
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, the
countries
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such
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as Norway, Luxembourg, and Austria with the highest income have a good education rate.
Then
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, Portugal is the lowest country for education graduates but is not in the
last
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place for average earnings money. Looking at the details, around 40% of people in four different states (Norway, Luxembourg, Austria and the UK) with a high income graduated from university except Austria just over 30%. Even though has the right rates of people attending university, Latvia places in second place from the lowest receipts.
In addition
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, the
countries
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that have approximately 25% of graduate students
which
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apply
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are Greece and Bulgaria with
income
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incomes
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of less than 8.000
euro
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euros
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. Interestingly, Portugal
with
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the smallest country with education rates has over 8.000
euro
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euros
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and places in the third
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countries
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country
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with the
minimum
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lowest
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salaries in Europe.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words countries with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Employment rate
  • Higher education attainment
  • Correlation
  • Trends
  • Patterns
  • Outliers
  • Economic factors
  • Cultural influences
  • Policy implications
  • Gender differences
  • Youth employment
  • Age-segmented
  • Statistics
  • Comparative analysis
  • Data interpretation
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