The chart gives employment and education statistics for eight European countries in 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The charts illustrate the rate of occupation and graduate students in eight European
countries
in 2015. Use synonyms
Overall
, the Linking Words
countries
Use synonyms
such
as Norway, Luxembourg, and Austria with the highest income have a good education rate. Linking Words
Then
, Portugal is the lowest country for education graduates but is not in the Linking Words
last
place for average earnings money.
Looking at the details, around 40% of people in four different states (Norway, Luxembourg, Austria and the UK) with a high income graduated from university except Austria just over 30%. Even though has the right rates of people attending university, Latvia places in second place from the lowest receipts.
Linking Words
In addition
, the Linking Words
countries
that have approximately 25% of graduate studentsUse synonyms
which
are Greece and Bulgaria withCorrect pronoun usage
apply
income
of less than 8.000 Fix the agreement mistake
incomes
euro
. Interestingly, Portugal Fix the agreement mistake
euros
with
the smallest country with education rates has over 8.000 Change preposition
apply
euro
and places in the third Fix the agreement mistake
euros
Use synonyms
countries
with the Fix the agreement mistake
country
minimum
salaries in Europe.Correct word choice
lowest
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