More and more people today are drinking sugar-based drinks. What are the reason for this? What are the solutions?
Nowadays,
people
are consuming more and more trash foods and drinks
. A relevant problem in this
topic is the increase of consuming sugar-based drinks
. This
essay will discuss the reasons for this
phenomenon and, after, some possible solutions for this
.
In regard to the reasons, firstly
, it can be highlighted the increase of highly processed food and fast food brands that incentive
Correct your spelling
incentivise
people
to drink sugar-based drinks
. For example
, McDonald's and Burger King grew a lot last
years. Correct word choice
in recent
Secondly
, another reason could be the extra good taste of it, that causes an addction
to the consumers, because of Correct your spelling
addiction
addition
this
, people
use to drink it daily. For instance
, some people
can´t spend a day without Coca-Cola. Thus
, they are addicted to the taste of it.
Due to
the negative effects of this
phenomenon, there are some solutions that can be taken to reduce it. One possible solution is trying to replace it with similar replacers, for example
, soft sugared drinks
could be replaced by sweet fruit juices, like apple juice. So, it is a healthy way to drink sweet drinks
instead
of sugared drinks
. Moreover
, another solution is changing life habits, for example
, with the help of nutritionists people
can enjoy in better diet plan. Another point is that research shows us that doing exercises can enhance our neuroplasticity and capacity to introduce new habits. Thus
, doing sports and following a diet plan can make easier
to change the habit of drinking sugar-based Correct pronoun usage
it easier
drinks
.
To sum up
, the growing trend of highly processed foods and drinks
and the addction
to Correct your spelling
addiction
addition
it's
taste are leading Replace the word
its
people
to consume more and more sugar-based drinks
. However
, it can be solved by changing some habits in day to day.Submitted by danielejaegger on
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