The three charts below show the value in Australian dollars of Australian trade with three different countries from 2004 to 2009. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
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The given charts
illustrates
the progression of Australian international trade with multiple countries Change the verb form
illustrate
such
as China
, Japan, and United
States between 2004 and 2009.
Correct article usage
the United
Overall
, it can be seen that Australia witnessed a trend of falling import level
in all countries. Fix the agreement mistake
levels
Similarly
, this
can be said to export level
, with the exception of China
which experienced a rise at the end
of the period.
Imports level
generally started from around 20 billion dollars in 2004 for all countries. In the following three years, it saw no significant change to
the number. Change preposition
in
This
is not for long however
, as 2007 marked a different scenario for Add the comma(s)
, however
China
. While
China
gradually increased to just below 30 billion dollars, there is hardly any noticeable positive climb for others. China
eventually hit its peak at the same level
,
and continued with the same proportion as it was the year after, surpassing Japan and America by 10%.
Exports Remove the comma
apply
level
on the other hand
showed a more intriguing picture. At the beginning of the period, China
scored last
in terms of position. Yet, it gradually climbed by around 20% in the span of 5 years. Japan presented a more shocking fluctuation as it rose to just below 30% by 2005. The amount stayed relatively steady before it saw a drastic jump to around 40% in 2008. This
number however
plummeted by 10% in the following year. Regarding United
States, the number is stable with Correct article usage
the United
slight
change in 2008.Add an article
a slight
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