The table shows information about metro systems in six different cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

The table shows information about metro systems in six different cities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words
The table illustrates the underground systems in six cities.
Overall
, we can see that the New York
City
Subway
and Beijing Busway have more
lines
and total lengths but neither of them has the highest cost of a ticket.
Then
, the Beijing
subway
has the highest annual journey compared to other
subway
systems. It is possible to separate the cities into two groups
Firstly
, the
metro
system with
lines
of more than 15 which is the New York
City
Subway
Beijing
Subway
and Paris
Metro
have a high total length except for Paris
Metro
the lowest of the six cities.
Then
, Beijing underground has the greatest number of users in a particular year.
Lastly
, the three remaining towns have fewer than 15
lines
such
as the Tokyo
Subway
, Mexico
City
Metro
and London Tube with 13 12 and 11
lines
respectively.
In addition
, the London tube has the lowest annual journeys at 1.2 billion followed by Mexico
City
Metro
at 1.6 billion. Interestingly, the London Tube is the costly
subway
than the other towns around 7.30 US dollars.
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