The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

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The chart describes the amount of

leisure

time

enjoyed by both

men

and

women

from various

emplyoment

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employment

status

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statuses

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.The

leisure

time

enjoyed by

mem

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men

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and

women

between

the

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apply

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1998 - 1999

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...

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It is observed that

highest

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the highest

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amount of free

time

spend

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spent

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by the

unemployeed

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unemployed

and retired

men

and

women

Womens

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Women

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are working as a part

time

spend less free

time

. To start, both

men

and

women

enjoy their

leisure

time

Male

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Males

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and

female

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females

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who are working as full

employment

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employees

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spends

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spend

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50hours and 30 hours of

thier

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their

time

to enjoy

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enjoying

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their free

time

.Only

women

spends

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spend

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their free

time

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apply

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less because they are

part

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part-time

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time

employee

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employees

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whereas

housewives

also

spend

their

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apply

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less free

time

Men

spend 90

hour

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hours

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and

women

spend 70

hour

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hours

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enjoy

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enjoying

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their free

time

because they are

unemployeed

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unemployed

workers. Retired workers enjoy most of their

leisure

time

as they are free from work

burden

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burdens

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.Here,

highest

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the highest

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hours

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number of hours

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are

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spend

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spent

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umemployeed

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unemployed

employees

and retired workers compared to others.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words leisure, time, men, women with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "amount" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.

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2
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
4
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
30
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

157 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

leisure time
employment status
full-time
part-time
unemployed
retired
disparity
illustrates
depicts
comparison
significant
notable
approximately
contrast
trend
fluctuation
analyze
evaluate
data

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The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

Libraries are a waste of money, therefore, computers should be used to replace them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The charts below shoes one government's spending on culture ad education in 1995 and 2005 and the number of people participating in Arts events in the same year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Some people say that all popular TV entertainment programmes should aim to educate viewers about important social issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Many people believe that the best way to produce a happier society is to ensure that there are only small differences in earning between the richest and the poorest members. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

According to those in the travel business, the nature of the average 'holiday' is changing. Rather than seeking a relaxing break in a far-away place, people now want exitement on their holidays and are keen to participate in unusual and challenging activities. Do you agree or disagree?