The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The chart describes the amount of
leisure
time
enjoyed by both men
and women
from various emplyoment
Correct your spelling
employment
status
.The Fix the agreement mistake
statuses
leisure
time
enjoyed by mem
and Correct your spelling
men
women
between the
1998 - 1999Change the article
apply
..
It is observed that Replace the punctuation
.
...
highest
amount of free Correct article usage
the highest
time
is spend
by the Change the form of the verb
spent
unemployeed
and retired Correct your spelling
unemployed
men
and women
. Womens
are working as a part Correct your spelling
Women
time
spend less free time
.
To start, both men
and women
enjoy their leisure
time
. Male
and Fix the agreement mistake
Males
female
who are working as full Fix the agreement mistake
females
employment
Replace the word
employees
spends
50hours and 30 hours of Correct subject-verb agreement
spend
thier
Correct your spelling
their
time
to enjoy
their free Change the verb form
enjoying
time
.Only women
spends
their free Change the verb form
spend
time
at
less because they are Change preposition
apply
part
Add a hyphen
part-time
time
employee
,Fix the agreement mistake
employees
whereas
housewives also
spend their
less free Correct pronoun usage
apply
time
. Men
spend 90 hour
and Fix the agreement mistake
hours
women
spend 70 hour
Change to a plural noun
hours
enjoy
their free Wrong verb form
enjoying
time
because they are unemployeed
workers. Retired workers enjoy most of their Correct your spelling
unemployed
leisure
time
as they are free from work burden
.Here, Fix the agreement mistake
burdens
highest
Correct article usage
the highest
hours
Correct quantifier usage
number of hours
is
Correct subject-verb agreement
are
spend
by Change the form of the verb
spent
umemployeed
and retired workers compared to others.Correct your spelling
unemployed
employees
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Vocabulary: Replace the words leisure, time, men, women with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "amount" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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