The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The chart describes the amount of
leisure
time
enjoyed by both
men
and
women
from various
emplyoment
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employment
status
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statuses
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.The
leisure
time
enjoyed by
mem
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men
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and
women
between
the
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apply
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1998 - 1999
..
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.
...
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It is observed that
highest
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the highest
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amount of free
time
is
spend
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spent
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by the
unemployeed
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unemployed
and retired
men
and
women
.
Womens
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Women
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are working as a part
time
spend less free
time
. To start, both
men
and
women
enjoy their
leisure
time
.
Male
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Males
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and
female
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females
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who are working as full
employment
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employees
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spends
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spend
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50hours and 30 hours of
thier
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their
time
to enjoy
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enjoying
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their free
time
.Only
women
spends
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spend
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their free
time
at
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apply
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less because they are
part
Add a hyphen
part-time
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time
employee
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employees
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,
whereas
housewives
also
spend
their
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apply
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less free
time
.
Men
spend 90
hour
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hours
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and
women
spend 70
hour
Change to a plural noun
hours
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enjoy
Wrong verb form
enjoying
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their free
time
because they are
unemployeed
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unemployed
workers. Retired workers enjoy most of their
leisure
time
as they are free from work
burden
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burdens
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.Here,
highest
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the highest
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hours
Correct quantifier usage
number of hours
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is
Correct subject-verb agreement
are
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spend
Change the form of the verb
spent
show examples
by
umemployeed
Correct your spelling
unemployed
employees
and retired workers compared to others.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words leisure, time, men, women with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "amount" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.

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