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The graph below gives information about internet users in three countries between 1999 and 2009. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about internet users in three countries between 1999 and 2009. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Make comparisons where relevant.
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This
 line chart presents the percentage
for
Change preposition
of
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internet
users
 in
USA
Correct article usage
the USA
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,
Canada
 and Mexico from 1999 to 2009.
Overall
, There was a significant increase trend in three countries in 10 years.
Canada
 increased the fastest. In
Canada
, there was a dramatic
rose
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rise
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 in 1999-2003.
Then
 the percentage went up slightly from 2003 to 2009. Mexico has the
less
Change the quantifier
fewer
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internet
users
 in these years. There was a gradual rose trend between 1999 to 2009.
USA's
Correct article usage
The USA's
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internet
users
 got the highest
percent
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percentage
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 in 1999. It
clmbed
Correct your spelling
climbed
 modestly. In 2009,
USA's
Correct article usage
the USA's
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internet
users
less
Add a missing verb
were less
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 than
Canada
's.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words internet, users, canada with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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