The pie charts below show the devices people in the 18 to 25 age group use to watch television in Canada in two different years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The pie charts below show the devices people in the 18 to 25 age group use to watch television in Canada in two different years.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The pie charts compare the main electronics Canada's citizens utilize to stream television in 2009 and 2019.
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, it can be seen that over time, people started to literate themselves with technology. Generally, there's a big difference with the use of conventional TV In 10 10-year period of time. It is shown by the data, that the use of conventional TV has dropped dramatically, from 34% to merely 4%. Not only traditional television, laptops rank second for the top downwards of the trend, specifically 8% in the
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decade, followed by other substances that are
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decreasing, the 6% fall on the usage of desktop computers.
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, as Canadian inhabitants levelled up their literation of technology, they gained more interest in
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TVs and tablets as their streaming devices were approximately 3 times bigger than in 2009 (specifically 27% and 19%). The mobile phone trend has
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been upgraded for almost half of the 2009 percentage.
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