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The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,

The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,
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This
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 graph appears to delineate
us
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apply
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about
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the variety
main
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of main
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 origins of air pollutants in the United Kingdom
on
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in
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 the period of 1990 to 2005 in
unit
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units
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 of million tonnes. The image illustrates sources from total air pollutants, industry and households that
lessens
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lessen
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, and transports that slightly
alleviates
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.
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, concluding the information given, we can see the transport factor and total air pollutants factor starting off high at 7 and slightly below 6 million tonnes respectively, until
then
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 diminishing to 4 and 2 independently.
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, industry
factor
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remained stagnant throughout the years until 2005, showing no improvements or changes being made to
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 cause. Households, too had a minor gain in 1999, before gradually decreasing to moderately above 0.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • air pollutants
  • emissions
  • sources
  • trends
  • decrease/increase
  • significant
  • transport sector
  • industry
  • regulations
  • cleaner technologies
  • domestic heating
  • agriculture
  • overtaken
  • time frame
  • comparison
  • conclusion
  • predicting
  • sulphur dioxide (SO2)
  • nitrogen oxides (NOx)
  • particulate matter (PM)
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