THE CHARTS BELOW SHOW THE AVERAGE PERCENTAGES IN TYPICAL MEALS OF THREE TYPES OF NUTRIENTS ALL OF WHICH MAY BE UNHEALTHY IF EATTEN TOO MUCH.

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The diagram compares information about the amount of three different nutritional

elements

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(

sodium

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, Saturated fat and Added sugar) which are included in

Breakfast

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Lunch

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, Snacks

as well as

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Dinner

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. Based on the information presented, most of the

Dinner

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meals

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consist of higher amounts of both

Sodium

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and Saturated fat.

However

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breakfast

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is considered to be a healthier meal as it is the lowest consumer of

sodium

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, Saturated fat and Added sugar. As regards Soduim, both

Breakfast

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and Snaks

meals

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consist of only 14% of

Sodium

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elements

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In contrast

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, there was a sharply high number of

Sodium

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elements

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inside

Dinner

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meals

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, 43%.

In addition

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, Around a third of the

sodium

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elements

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go in

Lunch

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foods.

Dinner

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meals

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include the highest amount of Saturated fat, 37%. Less than a fifth of Saturated fat consumption in

Breakfast

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foods(16%).

Furthermore

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, both Snacks and

Lunch

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meals

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consume the same amount of Saturated fat(about 26% and 21% respectively). Eventually, snacks

are

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apply

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the

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apply

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tend to be

an unhealthy food

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unhealthy food

a portion of unhealthy food

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, because of the high consumption of Added sugar, which consists of about 42%.

Moreover

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, the rest

meals

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(

Breakfast

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lunch

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and

dinner

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) share approximately the same amounts, between 16%, 19% and 23% respectively).

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Vocabulary: Replace the words elements, sodium, breakfast, lunch, dinner, meals with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 5 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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6
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
6
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

192 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

nutrients
average percentage
sodium
saturated fat
added sugar
unhealthy
intake
typical meals
breakfast
lunch
dinner
snacks
contribute
health implications
convenience
taste preferences
cultural habits
balance nutrient intake
maintain a healthy diet

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THE CHARTS BELOW SHOW THE AVERAGE PERCENTAGES IN TYPICAL MEALS OF THREE TYPES OF NUTRIENTS ALL OF WHICH MAY BE UNHEALTHY IF EATTEN TOO MUCH.

In some countries, owing a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

In both education and employment, some people work harder than others. Why do some people work harder than others? Is working hard always a good thing?

In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

In some schools and universities, girls tend to choose arts subjects (e.g literatures), boys tend to choose science subjects (e.g physics). Why do you think this is so? Should this tendency be changed? Do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree.