The chart below shows the book sales for five different types of fiction books from 2006 to 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the book sales for five different types of fiction books from 2006 to 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates
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the different sales that are made for five different
type
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of fiction
books
ranging from young adult
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to sci-fi &
fantasy
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and fantasy
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books
. The growth for some of these book types
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and some remained stagnant. The survey was made from the
year
2006 to 2010 and the gross earnings ranged from $0 to slightly under $120.000. For young adults, classics, and sci-fi &
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and fantasy
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book types, there
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no remarkable growth. The young adult and
classics
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book types peaked at $25.000 in the
year
2007 before the classic type dropped drastically to about $10.000.
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&
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and fantasy
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books
were too, having different but not heavy changes throughout the years before remaining the same number as it was the starting
year
.
In contrast
, mystery and romance
books
indicate high popularity by starting the gross
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at $60.000 and $80.000 respectively. Romance
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an all-time peak
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2007 before gradually declining to
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its starting sale. Mystery
also
had a peak in the
year
2007 before diminishing
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$60.000
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