The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the frequency of tourist visits from 2010 to 2014 to a specific
island
in the Caribbean. It is Use synonyms
then
broken down into two types of stays, Linking Words
first
being staying on the Correct article usage
the first
island
and the second one being staying on a Use synonyms
cruise
Use synonyms
ship
. Use synonyms
Overall
, the total Linking Words
number
of tourists steadily increased throughout the years. Between 2010 and 2017, the Use synonyms
number
of visitors that stayed on the Use synonyms
island
was Use synonyms
overall
stable Linking Words
while
the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
cruise
Use synonyms
ship
stays generally increased.
Starting from 1 Use synonyms
million
visitors in 2010, the amount of tourists that come to Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
island
usually increased by around half a Use synonyms
million
each year. It rose by around 250 Use synonyms
thousand
in 2011, 2012, and 2015 Use synonyms
while
stagnating once in 2016. It Linking Words
then
rose dramatically in 2017, increasing by 1,5 Linking Words
million
that year.
Between the two options given, being on the Use synonyms
island
or on a Use synonyms
cruise
Use synonyms
ship
, the first option seemed to stay more stable Use synonyms
while
the second one seemed to rise pretty consistently. Starting at around 700 Linking Words
thousand
, visitors that decided to accommodate themselves on the Use synonyms
island
rose by around 1 Use synonyms
million
between 2011-2013, before staying the same until 2015, dipping by around a quarter of a Use synonyms
million
before going back up to the previous Use synonyms
number
, showing a generally stable trend. Use synonyms
In contrast
, Linking Words
cruise
Use synonyms
ship
stays that started at 250 Use synonyms
thousand
in 2010 generally had a steady increase of around 250-500 Use synonyms
thousand
each year, only dipping once in 2012.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island, cruise, ship, number, million, thousand with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stays" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 6 times.
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