It is important to have a pastime
besides
working. A myriad of people work hard and do not dedicate any time Linking Words
for
rest. Change preposition
to
This
essay will look at the disadvantages of working overtime, and I firmly believe the result of Linking Words
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kind of living, brings us nothing but disadvantages.
Many individuals are working hard without any time for entertainment. In fact, If someone works and does not have proper rest, his mental health suffers. Linking Words
Moreover
, our brains not Linking Words
merely
need to get rid of the daily routines but Rephrase
only
also
need to do something for fun. To bring more credit to Linking Words
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argument, I should draw your attention to the research of MIT University which shows our wisdom will be suffered after 2 weeks without any leisure activities. Needless to say, more serious consequences are considerable in the long term.
Some people become workaholics. Indeed, they are working as much as possible and take no practical rest. Linking Words
In addition
, Linking Words
this
way of living is bringing them nothing but more distance between them and their families. Linking Words
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, their kids find themselves with a lack of emotional support and Linking Words
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leads them to keep their distance from their work-addicted parents. I believe that it is possible for each of us to become a workaholic one day, Linking Words
hence
it is important to evaluate ourselves, every now and Linking Words
then
, with the appropriate gauges to predict ourselves from being a workaholic.
In conclusion, the consequences of working hard with no pastime on the body are undeniable, and it is each person's responsibility to be considerate of his mental health and have some time for his pleasure activities. I think we should be Linking Words
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aware
to
the disadvantages of being a workaholic.Change preposition
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