The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school (S) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The map below
provide
information about the planning of a new school construction location and two possible options are given, S1 and S2. Change the verb form
provides
Overall
, according to
map
, S1 is located Correct article usage
the map
in
the northwest side of Canterbury, between the Change preposition
on
town
centre
and Sturry. Meanwhile, S2 is located in the town
centre
area
.
To begin
with, the first option of the school area
is situated in a country site. It is right across the main road that
is running
from Wrong verb form
runs
town
Add an article
the town
centre
to Sturry, a residential area
with 7000 population. The distance between the school and either town
centre
and Sturr are
the same, Change the verb form
is
for
about 2.5 km.
Change preposition
apply
On the other hand
, S1
option is planned to be built Correct article usage
the S1
on
the south Change preposition
in
area
of the town
centre
. Its location is traffic free
and around housing. S2 can be reached by students who live in Chartam, a countryside living Add a hyphen
traffic-free
area
with 4500 population. There is a mainroad
heading to it for approximately 7km.Correct your spelling
main road
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