The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school (S) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school (S) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The map below
provide
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information about the planning of a new school construction location and two possible options are given, S1 and S2.
Overall
,
according to
map
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the map
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, S1 is located
in
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on
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the northwest side of Canterbury, between the
town
centre
and Sturry. Meanwhile, S2 is located in the
town
centre
area
.
To begin
with, the first option of the school
area
is situated in a country site. It is right across the main road
that
is running
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from
town
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the town
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centre
to Sturry, a residential
area
with 7000 population. The distance between the school and either
town
centre
and Sturr
are
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the same,
for
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about 2.5 km.
On the other hand
,
S1
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the S1
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option is planned to be built
on
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in
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the south
area
of the
town
centre
. Its location is
traffic free
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and around housing. S2 can be reached by students who live in Chartam, a countryside living
area
with 4500 population. There is a
mainroad
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main road
heading to it for approximately 7km.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words town, centre, area with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • urban planning
  • infrastructure
  • residential
  • accessibility
  • proximity
  • town centre
  • site
  • amenities
  • proposed development
  • population distribution
  • environmental impact
  • traffic congestion
  • community needs
  • educational facilities
  • public transport
  • recreational areas
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