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The charts give information about honey-bee colonies and honey production in the US Summerise the information about honey-bee colonies and honey production by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The charts give information about honey-bee colonies and honey production in the US Summerise the information about honey-bee colonies and honey production by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
#information #honey-bee #colonies #honey #production #summerise #features #comparisons
Two charts string kingly illustrate details
honey
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of honey
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 -
bee
colonies
 and
honey
 items in 1970-2010 in the US.
At
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In
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 the first chart, between 1970 and 1980 the
number
 of
honey -
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honey-bee
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bee
colonies
 rose from over 4
millions
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million
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 to over 4.5
millions
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million
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. After that, it was dropping steadily from 1980 to 2010. The highest
number
 of
honey -
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honey-bee
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bee
colonies
 in 1980,
as
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was
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 over 4.5
millions
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million
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.
Besides
 that, in 2010, the amount of it
only
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was only
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 over 2
millions
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million
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 as well
it
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which
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 was the lowest figure.
At
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In
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 the second chart,
quantity
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the quantity
a quantity
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 of
honey
productions
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produced
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 from 1970 to 2010
had
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fluctuation. In 1970, the
number
 of products reached 130,000 tomes
as well as
 the highest figure but in 2010, there
was
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were
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 only 70,000 tomes
and
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apply
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it
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which
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 is
also
 the lowest
number
.
Overall
,
numbers
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the numbers
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 of
honey -
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honey-bee
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bee
colonies
 and
honey
 items
were
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apply
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both decreased over 5
years
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year
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 period.
However
, from 1970 to 1980, the
honey -
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honey-bee
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bee
colonies
 had a little went up.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words honey, colonies, number, bee, millions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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