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The graphs below give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs below give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The first bar graph
depict
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 the proportion of
computer
 ownership in general from 2002 to 2010,
while
 another graph illustrates the same thing based on educational
level
 which
divided
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is divided
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 into five different categories in 2002 and 2010. The figures in both graphs are measured in
percentage
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percentages
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.
Overall
, it is noticeable that both graphs have an upward trend over the period given.
Morover
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Moreover
, it is
also
 interesting to note that the highest proportion of people who have their own
computer
 happened in 2010.
Along with
this
, the biggest percentage of
computer
 ownership based on education
level
also
 exists in the same year. In terms of
computer
 ownership, in 2002, the
fiigure
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figure
 was slightly more than half
proportion
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the proportion
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 for about 58%.
This
 number
then
 consistently increased
for
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 about 2% more
in
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every two years, achieving
the
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 peak at approximately 72%
in
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 the end of
period
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the period
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.
Along with
this
, the number of people who had
computer
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computers
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 as their education
level
 climbed continuously. Postgraduate
level
 contributed the highest percentage of having
computer
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a computer
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 at 70% and 90% in 2002 and 2010 respectively, as opposed to those who were not enrolling high school diploma only had 12% for the first period and almost four times higher in 2010.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "along with, also".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words computer, level with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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