The graph below gives information about the percantage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make compariosans ehere relevant.
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the
paragprah
gives information Correct your spelling
paragraph
the
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on the
population
of several country
in Change to a plural noun
countries
asia
between 1970 and 2020 Change the capitalization
Asia
along with
the data, give
the predictions for Wrong verb form
giving
other
two decades.
regarding Correct article usage
the other
to
the data, Remove the preposition
apply
Indonesia
dan
Correct your spelling
and
Malaysia
rises the
Correct article usage
apply
population
every decade. Fix the agreement mistake
populations
Malaysia
start
with Wrong verb form
started
30
% Correct article usage
a 30
population
, the
Correct word choice
and the
population
in Malaysia
has
Wrong verb form
had
significant
increase in 1990 and will continue in future Add an article
a significant
around
80%. Change preposition
to around
Malaysia
will be the country has
many Correct pronoun usage
that has
population
between Philppines
, Thailand, and Correct your spelling
Philippines
Indonesia
.
similar to Malaysia
, Indonesia
start with15
% Correct your spelling
with 15
population
gradually
Correct word choice
and gradually
grow
every 10 years. Correct subject-verb agreement
grows
moreover
, in 2000 population
of Indonesia
Wrong verb form
began
begin
rise Add the particle
begin to
over
60% in 2040 Change preposition
by over
as a result
Indonesia
place
in second position. Wrong verb form
placed
apart from
this
, Philippines
Correct article usage
the Philippines
expirenced
an up and down of Correct your spelling
experienced
pupulation
. Correct your spelling
population
Philippines
Correct article usage
The Philippines
begin
Wrong verb form
began
the
Correct article usage
a
population
less
Change preposition
of less
35
% in 1970. Change preposition
than 35
nevertheless
, in 1990 the population
of Correct article usage
the philippines
philippines
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Philippines
fall
down and will increase again in 2010 until 2040. Wrong verb form
fell
although
,
the Remove the comma
apply
population
of Thailand gradually increase every decades
except in 1990 and 2000, Change to a singular noun
decade
thailand
will be Change the capitalization
Thailand
the
lowest position among Change preposition
in the
Malaysia
, Indonesia
, and Phippines
.Correct your spelling
Philippines
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