The chart illustrates the total minutes that the British use telephone call between 1995 to 2002 in three types including Local - fixed line, national and international - fixed line, and mobiles.
The chart shows how long the British
use
telephone Replace the word
used
call
that are divided Change the form of the verb
calls
in
three types namely, local-fixed line, national and international-fixed line and mobile for all calls from 1995 to 2002 (Change the preposition
into
calculate
in minutes).
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calculated
Overall
, the local call had fluctuated movement while
the other kinds of calls were slowly going up and it revealed that these two had similarity
.
It can be seen that the local line was the most Fix the agreement mistake
similarities
use
in the UK since the Replace the word
used
propotion
was the biggest even in the beginning. It kept increasing until in the year of 1999, the time started to drop until Correct your spelling
proportion
promotion
in
the end of the period, and in Change preposition
apply
this
case, the number was almost the same with
the first year which was nearly 70 billion minutes.
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in
On the other hand
, national and
international, and Correct word choice
apply
mobiles
were in Fix the agreement mistake
mobile
the
similar patterns. Correct article usage
apply
However
, the national and international numbers were larger than the mobiles
ones which Correct your spelling
mobile
shown
38% and 3% respectively. Wrong verb form
showed
The all
calls jumped from less than 5% to nearly touch 40% Remove the article
All
while
the international and nasional
types started from 38% to around 50%.Correct your spelling
national
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