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Some people think that modern tecchnology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable Discuss both views and give your opinion

#people #tecchnology
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is
viewed
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 that modern
technology
is
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 making individuals more sociable,
while
 others perceive the
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, thinking it is making
people
 less sociable. It can't be denied that in the past 10 years, the advancement of
technology
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inavitable
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inevitable
. Almost everyone
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 their own gadgets to communicate and work.
Further
, I will provide
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 discussion of both
perspective
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perspectives
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 in
this
 essay, but in my opinion, I believe that modern
technology
 is making
people
 less sociable. The argument
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 modern
technology
pushed
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people
 to be social stems from
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networking.
Technology
 allows
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society to explore and
expands
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their
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 contacts.
For instance
, an individual might be friends with 20
people
 just from a posting in the X application.
However
,
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 because by increasing a person's networking by social media, the person possibly won't seek new connections outside the internet.
Thus
,
although
 modern gadgets will add
people's
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network
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networks
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,
it
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 may
hinders
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 their social in
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real life.
On the other hand
, it is proven by the status quo that modern
technology
 is making
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civilians less sociable.
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is
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the high usage of social media and online games,
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it
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illustrates a lot of how
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the
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society
chose
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 to interact with others
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via
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by
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 the internet rather than do it physically, making the interaction between
people
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.
Hence
, it is believed that the rapid development of gadgets will just
making
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society
to be
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more and more
distance
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,
while
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online interaction is getting popular. In conclusion, my stance
support
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supports
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 the argument
of
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that
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 modern
technology
 is making
people
 less sociable. The internet
allow
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allows
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 civilians to connect with others, yes, but the real face-to-face interaction is getting fewer, resulting in a sociable
deprived
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deprivation
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.
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