The grash illustrates the proportion of the populatio in four countries (Philippines, Malaysia, Thailad and Indonesia) between 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.
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The graph illustrates the proportion of the population in four countries (Philippines, Malaysia,
Thailad
and Indonesia) between 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.
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the Philippines
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Malaysia
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In terms of Malaysia, it started at 30% then
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Introduction/Conclusion
Make sure to have a clear opening paragraph that introduces the graph and a concluding paragraph that summarizes the main trends or findings.
Logical Structure
Ensure logical sequencing of information and clear paragraphing, with each paragraph focusing on one main idea.
Supported Main Points
Support main points with specific data from the graph such as exact figures and comparatives.
Complete Response
Fully address all parts of the prompt, ensuring that your response covers the trends from 1970 to 2040 for all countries.
Clear and Comprehensive Ideas
Clarify and enhance your ideas with precise language and no ambiguity. Avoid spelling errors (e.g., 'Thailad' should be 'Thailand', 'nigligibaly' should be 'negligibly', 'ferthurmore' should be 'furthermore').
Relevant Specific Examples
Use evidence from the graph to provide relevant and specific examples that support the statements you make about population trends.
Fully explain your ideas
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