The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.
There are two bar charts
provide
in 2008. The first one is Wrong verb form
provided
give
information Fix the infinitive
to give
abut
Correct your spelling
about
decision
of Correct article usage
the decision
undegraduate
Correct your spelling
undergraduate
student
in the United Kingdom after Fix the agreement mistake
students
graduate
and did not Wrong verb form
graduating
full-time
work, and the second one Add a missing verb
do full-time
is illustrate
about Wrong verb form
illustrates
destination
of Add an article
the destination
postgraduate
Add an article
the postgraduate
a postgraduate
student
after they Fix the agreement mistake
students
finished
their degree.
Wrong verb form
finish
Overall
, it is clearly seen that the undergraduate student mostly continue their study into Linking Words
bigger
step, which is into Correct article usage
a bigger
Add an article
a master
the master
master
degree, Change noun form
master's
while
the Linking Words
postgraduate
mainly take Fix the agreement mistake
postgraduates
further
study Linking Words
into
doctoral philosophy.
Change preposition
apply
To begin
with, about 29 thousand Linking Words
of
UK graduates choose to take Change preposition
apply
Correct article usage
a master
master
degree right after their finished undergrad, 17 thousand of them did Change noun form
master's
the
part-time job, 16 thousand Correct article usage
a
still
Add a missing verb
are still
unemployment
, and the rest of them took voluntary work.
Replace the word
unemployed
On the other hand
, from the Linking Words
master
Change noun form
master's
graduate
, 2725 people Fix the agreement mistake
graduates
take
the doctoral program to get Wrong verb form
took
in deep
about their Correct word choice
in-depth
study
, 2535 did half Fix the agreement mistake
studies
job
, 1625 Correct pronoun usage
their job
still
Add a missing verb
were still
unemployment
, and 345 take opportunity to Replace the word
unemployed
do
volunteer.Unnecessary verb
apply
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