The graph below shows the proportion of population aged 65 and over among the US, Sweden and Japan.
The line graph displays the percentage of population among the eldest people, who are over 65 years old between 1940 and 2040 years in three countries: the USA, Sweden and Japan.
Overall
, the popullance
of seniors in Japan is dramatically lower, than in the other two countries, Correct your spelling
populace
although
, the ending percentage in this
country is the highest.
The elders in the US and Sweden are in almost equal proportion, their starting point was merely under 10% and approximately 7%, respectively. Then
, their proportion significantly increased, despite a few drops through a 100-year period. However
, in 2040 Sweden's population of people over 65 will exceed more than the US's, up to 25%.
The starting percentage in Japan was 5, in the next 60 years
it decreased to about 2,5%. Afterwards, it slightly grew to 10%, Add a comma
years,
nevertheless
, it is expected to markedly surge in 2030 to 25%.Submitted by katiakardash07 on
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