Some people suggest that sport champions should be banned from television, meanwhile the others say it is allowed. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Several people propose that

sport

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competitions ought to be banned

being

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from being

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broadcasted

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on

television

, whilst some argue that

it

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should be allowed.

This

essay disagrees with the notion that

television

channels

should not transmit

sport

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championships as it is a form of entertainment for the majority of people, and because the

athletes

that are telecasted are role models for many, especially the youth.

Sports

channels

that run sporting events,

such

as

sports

champions,

exists

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as a source of enjoyment for their viewers. Banning the broadcast of

sport

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competitions would deprive many of

this

joy and the

availibility

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availability

to watch high-level performances from the

athletes

.

Furthermore

, it could affect the

overall

television

ratings and streaming revenues. A recent survey conducted by Kompas suggests that 72% of

television

watchers are

sports

enthusiasts, with the highest screen time accumulation spent on

sports

channels

. Many players in

sport

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races can play a pivotal role in motivating youth today to engage in more physical activities.

This

is seen as a positive impact

for

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on

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many children and teenagers, especially given the condition today's generation

are

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not keen

in

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on

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spending their time

to do

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outdoors

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activities.

Moreover

, a significant amount of children and teenagers have a desire to follow in these

athletes

' footsteps after following episodes of

sport

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championships aired on

television

.

For instance

, research done on students at Jakarta Primary School concluded that the vast majority, 84% to be precise, dream to become

sportsman

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after viewing

sport

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competitions with their parents at home. In conclusion, it is not necessary to prohibit

television

channels

from airing

sport

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champions since it gives positive contributions

such

as providing

enterntainment

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entertainment

for

sports

enthusiasts, and aspiring

athletes

wannabees.