The graph below show the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below show the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given line chart illustrates how much
fish
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and other types of meat was consumed in a European country over the
period
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of 25 years from 1979 to 2004. Units are measured in grams eaten per person per week.
Overall
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, it can be clearly seen that all of the
fish
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and meat
consumption
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fell throughout the given
period
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, with the exception of chicken.
Beef
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The beef
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was the highest
consumption
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at the start,
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however
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however,
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it was
being
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apply
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surpassed by chicken by the
end
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of the
period
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. In terms of the highest
consumption
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at the
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end
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, chicken started at just below 150 in 1979.
Then
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, it
is
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experienced a moderate increase, before slightly
dropped
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dropping
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to precisely 150 in the next 5 years.
Furthermore
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, It gradually incline and reached a peak of 250 by 2004. Regarding the other three consumptions, beef stood at about 220, became the highest
consumption
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, followed by lamb and
fish
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which accounted for exactly 150 and over 50, respectively. Beef witnessed a fall to around 170.
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, it
is
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dramatically surged to around 230, before
declined
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declining
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and
hit
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hitting
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a trough
to
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of
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just above 100 by the
end
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of the
period
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.
In contrast
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, lamb had a decrease since the beginning until it reached 70 in 2004.
Similarly
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,
fish
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saw a
slightly
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slight
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fall to just below 50 and remained steady until the
end
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of intervals.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words fish, period, consumption, end with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just below" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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