The chart below shows the percentage of adults of different age groups in the UK who used the Internet everyday from 2003-2006. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the percentage of adults of different age groups in the UK who used the Internet everyday from 2003-2006. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph illustrates the proportion of adults using the
Internet
regularly in Britain from 2003 to 2006.
Overall
, it is noticeable that people under the age of 24 used the highest percentage of the
internet
, and the least was above 65
years
old in 2005. The main users of the
internet
were young adults aged between 16 and 24
years
old. They shared the same ratio of
internet
use, which accounted for 80% in 2003 and 2004; it rapidly increased in 2005 by 100%, but the percentage decreased slightly to 90% in the next year. People who were over 65
years
old used the
internet
in under a fifth of the all-given
years
. In the year 2006, residents spent the most amount of time on the
Internet
compared with the other three groups, except for the group below 24
years
old (84%). The group of 25-44, and 45-54
years
old were following an upward trend,
although
there were minor fluctuations
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • adults
  • age groups
  • Internet
  • daily users
  • increase
  • significantly
  • highest
  • lowest
  • rise
  • contrast
  • smallest
  • followed closely by
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