More and more people are moving away from agricultural background to relocate to cities in order to look for work. What will be the consequence of this? What solutions can you offer
People
in the
recent times Correct article usage
apply
had
started moving out from their agricultural background to relocate to cities to find a job. Wrong verb form
have
This
essay will discuss what all are the consequences, of this
move and also
include possible solutions we can offer with the relevant examples in the below paragraphs.
In earlier days, people
used to love working in
farms and other jobs mostly in Change preposition
on
agricultural
sector. They feel so proud of their work and passed Add an article
the agricultural
on
to Correct pronoun usage
it on
their
upcoming generations. In current times, Change the word
the
people
want to work in white collar
jobs rather than physical labour. If Add a hyphen
white-collar
less
Change the quantifier
fewer
people
choose to work in agricultural
sector Add an article
the agricultural
then
we have a shortage of food . For Instance
, In Canada, the federal government has opened two different programs for agricultural
sector to welcome farmers from other countries.
Government plays a vital role in these kinds of important situations. They can provide enough resources Add an article
the agricultural
such
as 24 hours
water and electricity supply to encourage Correct your spelling
24-hour
people
in farming
. Educate them about using new tools by arranging workshops and camps. Change preposition
to farm
For Instance
, In India, Telangana
former Chief minister sanctioned a bill for new machinery for farmers in Change noun form
Telangana's
last
quarter.
In conclusion, I would like to say that every job is important and Correct article usage
the last
people
from agricultural background
need assistance.Fix the agreement mistake
backgrounds
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