Yours neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house. Write a letter to your neighbors. In your letter Explain the reasons for the the noise Apologise Describe what action you will take
Dear Azam,
I hope that you will be doing well. I am writing
this
letter to response
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respond
your
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to your
complain
Replace the word
complaint
of
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about
noise
from my flat. Actually
some cupboards in my room Add a comma
Actually,
which
were out of order and we Correct pronoun usage
apply
we
started to repair them. In Remove the redundancy
apply
this
regard loud noise
produced
.
I felt embarrassed when I heard about your health Add a missing verb
is produced
effected
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affected
due to
the noise
. I
really sorry for Add a verb
I am
I was
this
and will make sure that the remaining work might be done underground.
Furthermore
, I ordered the workers that from
heavy mechanical equipment should be Change preposition
apply
avoidedso
that Correct your spelling
avoided so
avoided
noise
pollution could be minimized.
Again i
apologize to Change the capitalization
I
to
and I hope you understand our domestic situation.
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apply
Correct the word
Yours
Your
faithfully,
Muhammad Musab,Correct your spelling
Yours
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greeting and closing
Start by ensuring there is a clear opening and closing to your letter as this sets the tone and rounds off your communication effectively. Attention to the use of 'Dear' followed by the neighbor's name and ending with a suitable sign-off such as 'Yours sincerely' or 'Kind regards' can improve the greeting and closing aspect of the letter.
logical structure
Develop your ideas fully in each paragraph, ensuring that you expand on the details of the explanation, apology, and action. Try to start a new paragraph for each new idea or point you are making to support a more logical structure throughout your letter.
complete response
For task achievement, ensure that you provide a full response to each point in the task prompt. Expand on the reasons for the noise, offer a clear and sincere apology, and detail the actions you will take more fully to show a complete understanding of the task requirements.
suitable writing tone
Work on maintaining a consistent and appropriate tone throughout the letter. Since this is a semi-formal letter to a neighbor, the tone should be polite and considerate but still relatively informal. Avoid overly formal language and choose phrases that express genuine concern and friendliness.
single idea per paragraph
To improve coherence and cohesion, use transition words to link your ideas more smoothly and check the overall flow of the letter. Also, ensure each paragraph focuses on a single theme or idea for clarity.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,
